Idiosyncrasy
Lackluster, insipid, banal, inane
Lukewarm shadows glide wearily round here
Yet these beings let the question remain--
Why must they value being so austere?
Alas! They do not see the flaws they own
Being incredibly obtuse and gray
Some even sustaining a heart of stone
Heedless of the will that withers away
That is not I! It shall never be me!
Who would choose to live in this artless mode
I choose to soar to a land that is free
Where my might, my strength shall never erode
And with every eye, I see them glare
Speaking to me -- “To whom can you compare?”
2007-10-06 14:59:02 · 3 answers · asked by Rima 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
very good iambic pentameter.
A star.
2007-10-10 09:35:36 · answer #1 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I find it unique. It says alot about you if a person knows how to look. I feel like you see a lot of hyprocisy in the world and feel as if you are above it, so to speak. keep up the good work.
2007-10-06 15:05:34 · answer #2 · answered by pllbrn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
interesting, but good
2007-10-10 10:51:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋