A tear fell to the ground...
A plant grew....
(this is where you shake your head in a slow motion)
Yes a plant grew...
Wow it grew....... yes it grew, dude.
2007-10-06 07:50:44 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Do you think the poem is DEEP?
2007-10-06 07:55:19 · update #1
what a great poem and it is revised!!!
2007-10-06 07:55:47 · answer #1 · answered by Mag 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
And then a cat passed by
Stepped on the plant
(this is where you shake your head in a slow motion)
Yes a silly cat stepped on the plant
Wow, the plant is gone now, Chuck.
Your poem was so sensitive and very deep( the plant had deep roots), that inspired me for this poem above. Thank you !
2007-10-06 10:57:00 · answer #2 · answered by Alice in Wonderbra 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
at a similar time as the subject is consistent and good, so are the stanzas. exchange the tale, the activities, yet enable the comparable subject run by way of. Revise/undesirable - and a marginally hassle-free subject because of the fact the only above me stated. i might artwork lower back. Rhyme isn't undesirable nevertheless.
2016-10-06 05:12:05 · answer #3 · answered by hughart 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE reading your poems.. I am like your biggest fan! this is revised??? wow.. Its soo good, but I bet it was great unrevised...wow... *sigh*
2007-10-06 21:59:07 · answer #4 · answered by angelicsnowbabii 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I did shake my head and expected so much more.
It started so beautifully.
2007-10-06 07:57:08 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Below average
Sorry
2007-10-06 07:55:22 · answer #6 · answered by Raziel Lives 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
um.. honestly i think it's really bad. i mean no offense but i don't even get it. iono maybe i'm just stupid :) so unless it was a joke, wipe it off the face of the earth, but no offense
2007-10-06 07:57:38 · answer #7 · answered by lawrence w 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
yes yes..I write also poems, and i school once i wanted to say once, but they were not listening to me, they left.
But i like yours, it is sensitive
2007-10-06 08:14:11 · answer #8 · answered by Paco 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
omg this is revised? lol i think you are doing a fabulous job
2007-10-06 08:02:15 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
dude that was so deep, it was even better then your leg one. and i didn' t think that was possible
2007-10-06 11:46:02 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋