Some have it milky
it taste like silk
Some make it weak
with no tea in, bleak
Some drink it black,
tastes like shelac
Some make the spoon
stand up too soon
Some make chemical brew
spew
Some want to make it myself
it's better for the health.
2007-10-06 06:13:56 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Try Tylers German tea-time game everybody I got 30 kills beat that!
2007-10-06 11:07:34 · update #1
I feel as if I were in England about to have tea with the queen.
2007-10-06 10:08:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You've got a good idea there, but your poem needs a lot of work on the rhythm, and the rhyming words don't really make too much sense, especially the last four lines. Try for a rewrite and then submit it to us again.
2007-10-06 17:12:02 · answer #2 · answered by gldjns 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a blistering triumph! Clearly no mortal man can approach your artistry and talent. The tea making ceremony is yours in exclusivity. Now put the kettle on.
2007-10-06 15:17:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's cute
2007-10-06 13:24:44 · answer #4 · answered by Analyst 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋