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The Wild, Wild Web
Out of the web rode a stranger
Danger, alert of his coming
This cunning dark figure on mouseback
This hacker, attacker banshee
Spin sinner double dissolver
Revolver…of issues, sans facts
Tactless mudslinger, give him the finger
Fight back, you slackers, he’s whack!
Your posse can tangle this strangler
Carrot dangler, it’s his time to pay
Away with your feckless meander
No pander, from us you’ll receive
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2007-10-06 01:24:39 · 10 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It's scary! Especially because "tangler this strangler / Carrot dangler" is almost impossible to say for me (no, I don't have a speech impediment!).
2007-10-06 02:44:48 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Liked it yes, but who is the cunning dark figure on mouseback you speak of? I am scared of him.
2007-10-06 09:31:53 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
You had me at "cunning dark figure on mouseback"
Loved it. It was awesome TD--great rhythm.
2007-10-06 10:31:39 · answer #3 · answered by Todd 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I must agree with them that this poem sounds rather scary! Well...maybe you have deliberately chosen scary images to create that kind of effect...but whaddaheck i still like it anyway! ;-)
2007-10-06 12:28:19 · answer #4 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am siding with Annabella on this one, but it is still well done, good rhythm, good flow, albeit a tad strangled.
:)
2007-10-06 10:03:36 · answer #5 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very Matrix! Loved it!
2007-10-06 10:23:45 · answer #6 · answered by Semp-listic! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi,
Well said.
Pollyanna
2007-10-06 09:18:23 · answer #7 · answered by pollyanna 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
LOL...you're one funny Americanski
2007-10-06 09:27:51 · answer #8 · answered by Helena Handbasket 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
That's awesome!, I hope they make a movie of it oneday.
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2007-10-06 08:51:38 · answer #9 · answered by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
im right up there clapping with tyler
2007-10-06 10:05:46 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋