Title: These Sad times
By: Sammy (Me!)
Age: 13
I wake up,
Playin' on my guitar,
Waiting for a signal,
Watchin you fade away..
From this long distance..
I pick up..
I hear your voice crack,
I watch you tearin up
These sad times..
Your so far away
And I'm hurt inside
I love you..
I love you so bad
I can't watch this moment fade,
These sad times that ring..
And even though your gone somehow
I still love you now,
But now your movin on
These sad times..
Such sad..
Times..
Such sad....times..
2007-10-04 11:06:42 · 9 answers · asked by Dreamer 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's fantastic!!!! I like it a lot.
2007-10-04 11:11:14 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow this is great!! soo ur 13? thats awesome that ur able to write really good song lyrics, at that age... im 14.. and i cant write for my life lol :D
keep writing! my friend writes songs and shes awesome at it.. i think it would be cool if you did a duet! aha.. just thinking
2007-10-04 18:14:47 · answer #2 · answered by xzomgitshannahxx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. Keep on writin' and maybe we'll see your name on the next biggest hits list! : )
2007-10-04 18:12:14 · answer #3 · answered by Jinxyblue 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is great! Keep up the good work!
2007-10-04 18:14:56 · answer #4 · answered by Maxine PantherFan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10.. Really good * 4 u
2007-10-04 18:09:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's pretty good, but u should make rhyme a lot more. =P i like to write songs too!
2007-10-04 18:11:55 · answer #6 · answered by Kiana Kisses! :p 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
cute song.
not bad for a 13year old.
2007-10-04 18:10:30 · answer #7 · answered by Demetra 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you'll go far! keep writing music. Baaaahhh!
2007-10-04 18:10:05 · answer #8 · answered by Bill E. Goat 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not bad...i'm 13 too and i like it!!good job!!
2007-10-04 18:16:50 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋