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So I've hit a few inevitable bumps in my writing, and I'd mean a whole lot if someone could help me out on the following points:

1. The novel takes place in a different world, and as such has different races, fauna, etc. How would I describe the appearance one of these without it boring the reader?

2. My main character has had a rather rueful past, and it just sounds like a sob story when I put it on paper. How would I avoid that, but still keep all of the original information?

3. I don't actually have complete plot yet. Any suggestions on where I could look to get ideas?

Any answers to these questions would be very greatly appreciated!

2007-10-04 09:05:15 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

8 answers

1. Here's a great tutorial on how to do great descriptions as opposed to mediocre descriptions: http://www.elfwood.com/farp/thewriting/sitsdecept/sitsdecept.html

2. You could have it so the main character doesn't like to talk about it at first, but he reveals details a little at a time as other characters earn his trust.

3. Some people say looking at pictures helps. http://www.elfwood.com

2007-10-04 09:43:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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2016-10-06 02:43:08 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

1. Have you read A Wrinkle In Time by Madeline L'Engle? She does a beautiful job of this. Read it, even though its a 'kids' book, its still wonderfully written and enjoyable.

2. Give it some mystery. In reality, no one spills their guts to someone they're just meeting.(think of the reader as someone they just met, even if the reader is never acknowledged, its a great tool.) Hint at it at the beginning, then build, then reveal at the climax.

3. Read, read, read. And research. Those are the best tips I can give.

2007-10-04 09:10:33 · answer #3 · answered by Ana Makes Art. 3 · 1 0

Seriously take a look at some other books. J.K. Rowland does an amazing Job at describing things like that. Also take a look at lord of the rings. I "read" the audiobooks. Jim Dale does an awsome job reading the HP series.

2. try some oppsites Contradict some of it.

3. see 1.

2007-10-04 09:17:45 · answer #4 · answered by Tino 4 · 0 1

I would create a parallel earth. I was inspired to say that because recently scientists have spotted some kind of activity in the universe that they believe could create a new earth. You could have the following situations for your character: death of a spouse, estranged parents, a government that wants to keep him on a tight leash, etc.

2007-10-04 09:15:16 · answer #5 · answered by Andre 7 · 0 0

#1.

Read one of several novels by Larry Niven. He is the most original creator of aliens I have ever read.

Personal Favorite "The Mote In God's Eye." (with Jerry Pournelle)

2007-10-04 09:10:10 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Well, I would love to help but it if you don't even have a complete plot and outline, everything will be messed up. You should get a writers manual and follow the steps there.

2007-10-04 09:09:37 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

I think you could benefit from the articles on Holly Lisle's website. She's a bestselling fantasy writer who has a plethora of helpful tips for those of us just starting out.

2007-10-04 12:24:49 · answer #8 · answered by Caitlin 7 · 0 0

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