I learned today
I need you more each day
Hold on to you
Don't ever let go....
2007-10-03 08:27:19 · 28 answers · asked by Chichiri 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Holidays ➔ Valentine's Day
Um? It seems like an unfinshed poem, a lame one at that.
2007-10-03 08:30:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
lame. you should do:
A Valentine is nothing like
A chocolate or a rose.
For in a week these shall be gone,
But Valentines remain.
If love were always sweet to tongue
Or fragrant to the nose,
Each day would be like Valentine's,
And we would go insane.
A Valentine just hangs around
Waiting to be kissed
Long after special days have passed
And every days are here.
So one is wise to choose one well
And chocolates to resist.
For in the midst of mania
It's nice to have one near.
2007-10-03 22:05:49 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
eh, i think if i was your s/o and cared about you then i would think it sweet...but being an outside party i think its sort of lame. but that doesn't mean not to say it to you s/o...it's the thought that counts and writing something like this totally shows you love and care for this person and you are thinking about them all the time and just wanted to put those thoughts into words
on a second thought...it's sweet so say to your s/o. good luck
2007-10-03 15:31:23 · answer #3 · answered by Hey U, Yeah U..Get over here 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what thts it here i ll show u how its done
i learn each day when we are closer
i learn each day as i hold u tigher
i learn to foget pain and sorrow
i wont let go i will not leave i found the way to ure heart
by following the fallen leaves
fallen_ leaves50 is the name of my yahoo account XD
2007-10-03 15:44:31 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This sounds like true love I read it & told my hubby "I learned today I need you more each day"
Very sweet & not at all sappy
for those of you who said it doesnt rhyme, Poetry doesnt have to, only cheesy hallmark cards do!
2007-10-03 15:38:45 · answer #5 · answered by cauliflower 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very sweet sentiment. In practically every 70's hard rock band song, so not really very original, but still sweet.
2007-10-03 21:30:00 · answer #6 · answered by Emissary 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet! Very nice
2007-10-03 15:29:34 · answer #7 · answered by short cherry 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
okay, i would say
I learned today
I need you more each day
I'll hold on you
and never let go.
well somthing like that.
2007-10-03 15:33:50 · answer #8 · answered by just passing by 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Reeks of co-dependency, clinginess, and looks like something a lust obsessed middle-schooler would write.
2007-10-03 15:30:53 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds like the beginning of a poem called "why I stalk you"
2007-10-03 19:54:38 · answer #10 · answered by ejc0782 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋