Dear sir
I have given below the details of staffing details as specified by you. pleas find.
organisation has a home for orphan children and abondaned and an old age home, It is operated from its own cost and some external contributions.currently the organisation is staffing by 7 person. our secretary Father John take care of the whole implementation and two persons are working for the "save child" project. one of them is the co ordinator and another one is office staff. orphan and old age home are take care of 3 persons. 2 of them are maintanance workers and one of them is warden. apart from this 2 technically qualified persons are working for the communication, monitoring and proper implementation of the organisation activities. They do all the awareness programmes, meetings and take care of the conferences which is conducted by the organisation occationally.
Hope this helps you,
regards
is there any rule to end the letter "regards"... I use regards and yours truely, faithfully depending on the person but I dont know the actual usage of native speakers
thanks a lot
2007-10-02 08:24:41 · 8 answers · asked by muruasm 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Where to begin? Here's my re-write:
Dear Sir or Madam:
Below are the details of staffing you requested.
This organization operates both a home for orphaned or abandoned children as well as an old age home. It is operated from its own budget and some external contributions, and is currently staffed by seven people. Our secretary, Father John, takes care of administration; two staffers are working for the Save the Children project, one as coordinator and the other as office staff; three people are assigned to the orphanage and old-age home, two are maintanance workers and one of them is the warden. In addition, two technically qualified persons are working for the communication, monitoring and proper implementation of the organization's activities. They run all the awareness programmes, meetings and conferences that the organization occaisionally conducts.
Please contact me should you need any clarification or additional details.
Sincerely,
(your full name)
(your full title)
(name of organization)
(your phone, fax and e-mail information)
That's just a quick re-write. Please let me know if there's anything else you need help with -- English is not an easy language! Good luck!
2007-10-02 08:30:03 · answer #1 · answered by tracymoo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Sir,
Below I have given the staffing details that you requested.
The organization has a home for orphan and abandoned children as well as an old age home. With some external contributions, it is able to pay for its own costs. The organization is currently staffed by 7 persons. Our secretary, Father John, takes care of all the implementation. There are two persons working for the "Save the Child" project. One of them is the coordinator and the other is office staff. Three persons take care of the orphanage and the old age home. Two of these are maintenance workers while one is the warden. Apart from this, two technically qualified people are working for the communication, monitoring and proper implementation of the organization's activities. They do all the awareness programs and meetings as well as take care of the conferences which are conducted by the organization occasionally.
I hope this helps you.
Sincerely,
2007-10-02 15:40:48 · answer #2 · answered by my 2 cents 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its confusing because i don't know what it really is about.. i'll try but some things i can't even work out what your actually trying to say...
Dear Sir
I have given below the staffing details as specified by you. pleas find. (i don't know what your trying to say here)
This organisation is a home for orphaned and abondaned children and also a home for the elderly. It is operated using its own funds and some external contributions. Currently the organisation is staffed by seven people. Our secretary Father John takes care of the whole organisation and two others are working for the "Save the Children" project. One of which is the co-ordinator and the other office staff. The home takes care of 3 people. 2 of them are maintanance workers and one of them is warden. Apart from this 2 technically qualified people are working in administration for the company. They do all the awareness programmes, meetings and take care of the conferences which are conducted by the organisation.
Hope this helps you,
Regards,
[name]
2007-10-02 15:34:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need to focus on spelling and punctuation. Then focus on the grammer part. Sentences start with a capital letter. I'll help you with the first sentence. Dear Sir, Here are the staffing details
you have requested.
2007-10-02 15:30:23 · answer #4 · answered by Precious Gem 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My poor dear murausm. It needs way too much help than we can offer hear. The first place I would start is with spell check. After that I would have someone stand over you and help you with the punctuation. There also is redundancy in it. As in the first sentence twice you've used the word details.
2007-10-02 15:35:48 · answer #5 · answered by Debbie Queen of All ♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, I am unable to make much sense out of your choice of words. I saw many misspellings. I couldn't fix it if I wanted to.
2007-10-02 15:29:10 · answer #6 · answered by SaturnMan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your spelling is awful.
And, regarding the footer of the letter, if you begin "Dear Sir", you should end it with:
"Yours Sincerely,"
"Yours truly,"
-or-
"Respectfully yours,", or something of the like.
2007-10-02 15:35:24 · answer #7 · answered by Karmacy 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
not at all...I started to write the reasons why, but there are just too many mistakes
2007-10-02 15:36:01 · answer #8 · answered by autumn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋