My Grandma was a "do it all" woman, who rasied my Dad and his siblings as a single mom with a full time job as a nurse.
I got marked for diction and tense change between who and raised.
I am not sure what I need to change or why.
2007-10-02 07:22:22 · 3 answers · asked by babysteaks3 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
My grandmother was a "do it all" type of woman. As a single mother, she managed to raise my father and his siblings while working full-time as a nurse.
2007-10-02 07:39:52 · answer #1 · answered by fangtaiyang 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
My grandma was a "do it all" woman, raising my dad and his siblings as a single mom while simultaneously working as a nurse full time.
2007-10-02 07:32:00 · answer #2 · answered by Jenn B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My Grandma was a "do-it-all" woman who simultaneously raised my dad and his siblings singlehandedly while working full time as a nurse.
2007-10-02 07:28:32 · answer #3 · answered by barb j 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋