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{Keep reporting it, I'll just keep putting it back up even if it's under name after name after name little fool *^_^*}


Just Thought That You Should Know

A.Z. I’m so much drawn to you
and dream of you each night
I swore I got to touch you
on one celestial flight

I know you were responding
when you felt breath upon your ear
and heard my silent whispers
“Thomas, I am here”

Your sighed a sigh of happiness
your lips began to curl
I whispered in your ear once more
“Thomas, you are my world”

I felt I had to say this
though I know not how you feel
It just may be I’ll suffer alone
in dreams played so surreal

No matter who you get with
or the places you may go
remember my love’s true to you
just thought that you should know...

2007-10-02 06:10:46 · 8 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

8 answers

SHAD

i love you i love you i love you

you brought tears to my eyes and goosebumps to my flesh

keep this up and i'll think you're getting fresh

hey hon...how was that ???

2007-10-02 10:27:44 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 2 0

What a meek Society that we are subjected to on a daily basis. Small minded little people who remain uneducated without any hope or setting any goals. This Lady shines with talent that you have found inappropiate for the reason that you are jealous & live within a small World without the ability to be creative. So set back in your getto and smear the life of another. With people like you not a soul will call you Brother..............

2007-10-02 15:21:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

I dont see a reason why this would be reported.
If this is from your heart and holds meaning to you and the one you write about in it. Then there's nothing to worry about.
Try posting it somewhere like a poetry site here on line outside here to know just how good this really is from other points of views.

2007-10-02 13:21:10 · answer #3 · answered by poetbjc64 5 · 1 0

well for those who are bothering this person and who keeps on reporting this is verry rude and i think should be reported them selves. this is not out of the rules this is a great poem and i just so happend to love it. and as someone who is a poet would know when they see a good poem. so yea who ever has a problem needs to come deal with me my yahoo name is tommysgurl_4502214 and i am on line now. it is tuesday and 3 52pm and i dare whom ever is messing with this girl to step up to me.

2007-10-02 15:52:23 · answer #4 · answered by tommysgurl_4502214 2 · 1 0

It's good, it's good, I know it's good.
Send the tattler to the hood.
That's the thing I think we should.
Then beat him with a stick of wood.

2007-10-02 18:47:51 · answer #5 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1 0

As it happens, my name IS Thomas, and I like that.

2007-10-02 19:03:05 · answer #6 · answered by Tom K 6 · 1 0

SHAD another great poem.I love readying your poems and all you write ,You are a very talented lady...

2007-10-02 14:37:34 · answer #7 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1 0

my name is johnathan mccurtain i am 17 teen sorry i did not tell you

2007-10-02 13:31:57 · answer #8 · answered by jonathan m 2 · 0 0

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