Please help me edit the work eperience section in my resume:?

Question

I'm not good at writing resumes, but please help me edit for grammer, flow, ect...:

Duties Included PC hardware, operating system, and network troubleshooting, design, and maintenance. Extensive
Knowledge of Windows based operating systems and advanced MS Office skills. Posses strong experience in providing software support for a large enterprise resource planning system, inventory management system, and ecommerce shopping cart system. Extensive experience in providing telephone and remote support to end users. Exercises patience and maintains a friendly demeanor when assisting clients. Experience with basic and advanced networking, home networking and small business networking. Experience with hardware and how to build and take apart PC’s and Servers. Experience with Widows XP, Office 2003/XP, Outlook, Windows Server 2003, IE, Firefox, Norton Ghost, Adobe Acrobat, Wireless Networks, HP Printers/Scanners, Storage Area Networks, Active Directory, and Whitebox Linux,

Answer 1

I can tell you one thing - it is way too wordy. Try to work to cut this down.

Answer 2

My work related efforts involved many varied computer skills. From basic net working to Windows XP, Office 2003/XP and the use of HP Scanners/ Printers.
Provided telephone support as well as remote; both mean the use of patience and a friendly demeanor working with clients, and knowledge of hardware, right down to physically installing them.

Answer 3

I think you should put the excersises patience part at the end, it doesn't belong with the other things, and it messes up the flow of the words. It makes you stop and reread it and then think ok what does that have to do with the rest of this.