My teacher want me to "edit sentence structure" any suggestion
2007-10-01 10:30:31 · 4 answers · asked by redhead 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The increase in crime, dropouts and stress may be the result of the growth of poverty in America.
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The growth of poverty in America may be causing an increase in crime, high school dropouts and stress.
2007-10-01 10:34:57 · answer #1 · answered by Mollyismydog 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A result of growing poverty in America is an increase in crime, school dropout rates and stress.
2007-10-01 17:36:06 · answer #2 · answered by suzanne g 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poverty in America is increasing. This could be a cause for increases in crime rate, school dropouts and stress related illness.
2007-10-01 17:40:17 · answer #3 · answered by wry humor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poverty in America is not growing. The premise of your statement is wrong. The US has more people employed than ever before in history. The average wages for workers are as high as they have ever been.
2007-10-01 17:39:16 · answer #4 · answered by regerugged 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋