Don't you dare say another word
All those lies i already heard
You rest your head upon my heart
And once again the fire starts.
can you continue the next four lines... show me what you got.
2007-10-01 06:18:54 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
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2007-10-01 06:23:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 10⤋
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2016-10-05 22:06:37 · answer #2 · answered by osazuwa 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You always turn me inside out
leaving me with all but doubt.
I gave you, my life, my heart
Again and again, just torn apart.
I will have to change, not you,
I have really thought it through.
Take you back, I know I could
But leave me now, this time for good.
2007-10-01 07:58:48 · answer #3 · answered by Vanilla Icequeen 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
don't you dare pull those tears i can't stand to see you cry
every time you look at me a piece of me just dies
don't you dare promise me it won't happen again
my heart may have some fire left, but its simmering to an end
2007-10-01 06:24:06 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 3⤋
Truth was too hard to bear
But I saw you standing there
You chose her over me
Now the demons won't let me be
2007-10-01 06:24:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 3⤋
I kiss your soft lips
caress your full hips
melt in your embrace and feel the pain
here i am once again, in your reign
2007-10-01 06:24:11 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 3⤋
But it was just a dream
she says, a lark.
For you were never close,
just a memory in the dark.
2007-10-01 06:47:31 · answer #7 · answered by Mele Kai 6 · 2⤊ 4⤋
for all your lies, i can forgive
but give me all you have to give.
for though im hurt, my love is true,
just show me that your love is too!
:)
2007-10-01 06:25:50 · answer #8 · answered by dayofthephoenix99 3 · 3⤊ 3⤋
You flame me with your attitudes.
Don't give me a choice then make me choose.
How do you make me feel so high,
when half the time I want to die?
2007-10-01 06:26:30 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 4⤋
you put me out before it catches
in my breast pocket i had my matches
now go away you bloody liar
before you start another fire..
2007-10-01 06:34:04 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 4⤋
so now its time to push away
leave me now, dont delay
you had your chance, this is your fate
the lies you told, now its all too late
for us
2007-10-01 06:29:54 · answer #11 · answered by mish 2 · 4⤊ 3⤋