Darkness Is My Ally
The darkness is my greatest friend,
An ally tried and true.
It holds me tight and won't let go,
No matter what I do.
It lets me hear the world around,
And yes, I still can feel.
Though darkness is an awesome force,
My life it cannot steal.
We are conjoined, and cannot part,
The darkness and my strife.
It may consume my very sight,
But will not take my life.
For when I'm gone the darkness dies,
I'll dwell in heaven's light.
It's then I'm sure that I will see,
My ally's final flight.
For now we two are making friends,
We are two of a kind.
We'll be together on this earth,
As long as breath I find.
2007-10-01 06:10:32 · 9 answers · asked by Dondi 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
saphire, my inspiration is the glasses I have to wear to read, and the fact that someday they won't help.
2007-10-01 09:00:03 · update #1
Darkness rules my friend...
Blessed Rai’
Darkness calls upon me
to every naughty thought
of crime, hate, mystery, murder
all of which I’m not
The deepest side of darkness
of which I’m quite fond of
Is that of earthly magic
healing sick and love
My hole deeper than others
buried beyond beliefs
No mortal can not ever
dig deep enough to me
I possess no powers and
never claimed to be
a higher source among you all
nor in society
Darkness is my best friend
no need to carry light
for I know many others wronged
yet, others see it right
Be pierced my hands at end
but, only by bullets way
100,000 years from now
most worldly folk will say
Blessed Rai’
All the Very Best, A H Shadow Rai'
2007-10-01 15:17:14 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
No offense, love, but I honestly excepted nothing less than this. And no, that's not a compliment. More rhymes, and about the same thing I hear of everyday: being consumed by darkness 'n whatnot. Honestly I find no originality here, because I've read this before. Almost literally.
You see... An aspiring writer showed me a piece quite similar to this just yesterday. So honestly I'm not impressed, but rather bored. It's simple message that's been overdone for years now. At least that's my opinion.
2007-10-02 06:30:19 · answer #2 · answered by Twili 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
To Dondi !
They say that blindness comes
When eyes absorb the sun no more.
You hold inside
A joy and light
Your smile brings to the fore.
Do not believe that darkness
Holds a final victory,
O'er a heart
Where love and hope reside.
Blindness cannot steal away the
Goodness grown inside.
By Kitty ( AKA Bemo)
2007-10-01 12:24:46 · answer #3 · answered by Bemo 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
This is a beautiful piece, flows very nicely, once again great work! love it!
2007-10-01 07:19:41 · answer #4 · answered by HisPrincess 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Wow this is really scary, I made a similar poem today while i was in school, but this is better!!
2007-10-01 07:17:01 · answer #5 · answered by SRT8Challenger 1 · 2⤊ 1⤋
OMG!!!!
No wonder you write such beautiful words.
You are just so awesome. I would be devastated.
2007-10-01 06:48:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
thats beautiful
2007-10-01 06:14:09 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
O M G!!!....
that was beautiful... what was your inspiration?
2007-10-01 08:46:31 · answer #8 · answered by Saphire 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
nice work!
2007-10-01 06:13:42 · answer #9 · answered by dayofthephoenix99 3 · 2⤊ 1⤋