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2007-09-30 23:21:51 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I wrote a similar piece in 1967. The title was "I".
2007-10-01 00:27:57 · answer #1 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 4⤊ 1⤋
IF only this poem was longer
it wouldn't be the same
but give the opening title
a completely unrelated name
entitle it IS, just to confuse the masses :-)
Great work.
2007-10-01 01:24:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, not to be harsh and you said to be critical, but this is simply a postmodern effort that could be construed as profound, but not to the eye or ear of someone who appreciates poetry in its finer form
2007-10-01 21:01:04 · answer #3 · answered by LadyRebecca 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
IF u should some more, I would say yes, but this is the shortest poem that I have read!
2007-10-04 14:04:40 · answer #4 · answered by ♫Di [Pro-Love, Anti-Hate]♫ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is totally confusing, could you explain the underlying message in this most elaborate work.
2007-10-01 12:29:28 · answer #5 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its an excellent poem i'd buy a copy of it if you published it
good things about it:
easy to memorize
short to recite
multiple meanings
hard to misspell
makes you think about life
2007-09-30 23:25:55 · answer #6 · answered by Landon K 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The rhyme scheme is brilliant, but you should work a little more on the rhythm. Good job!
2007-10-01 00:06:22 · answer #7 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well I think it is obvious to me at least, Dante's A Divine Comedy!
2007-10-03 23:45:54 · answer #8 · answered by kissaled 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was a little short, but over all, was fantastic! Keep up the good work.
2007-09-30 23:27:39 · answer #9 · answered by Kamy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't have time to read this now. I will come back and comment later--there are too many layers here to read all at once.
2007-10-01 01:54:58 · answer #10 · answered by Todd 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋