Dark Side Of Black
I am not a hue or visual impression experienced in direction,
I am not a negative connotation that stains an imagination.
I am not a known falsehood in propaganda to create an opponent,
I am not a tragic time embarrassing the damaging nature content.
I am not a rain cloud in a psychological atmosphere,
I am not a curse bursting out of sentimental fear.
I am not a tactic or an ingredient of destruction,
I am not a secrecy unknown or inexplicable in expression.
I am not a witch craft associated with human skull,
I am Black, I reside in the beautiful.
I endeavor to liberate this existence out of the panorama of life,
I no longer can perceive this existence of my being as a gloomed failure.
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Spiritual Rhapsody
Divinity descended to the mortal planes in a manner so inconspicuous,
Faith was a constant companion while I remained so unpretentious.
I was thrown by destiny into his benign presence,
No obstacles ever matched my simplicity and resilience.
Freed from clutches of materialism I entranced in perfection,
Tears of elation sprang out without rhyme or reason.
Destination synonymous to a paradise is the abode of the blessed,
This torch lit by me cannot be extinguished.
A lump of clay transformed into a pot of totality,
Lost in inexhaustible bliss I bloomed to full maturity.
2007-09-30 10:52:08 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I completely enjoyed both. I especially liked the use of the metaphors in "Dark Side of Black." I would have to rate it slightly greater than the other.
2007-09-30 11:09:53 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Spiritual Rhapsody
2007-09-30 10:55:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Both are really good but I like Dark Side of Black better.
2007-09-30 10:59:11 · answer #3 · answered by Nico 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Both are excellent...
However Dark Side Of Black seems to have more depth.
2007-09-30 10:55:36 · answer #4 · answered by Pieridae 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Both- 10
2007-09-30 10:54:49 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I vote for No# 2.
2007-09-30 10:55:22 · answer #6 · answered by Brenda 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the first one its very gothic lit type and plus its just about time for halloween and that poem has a very dark feel to it
2007-09-30 10:55:58 · answer #7 · answered by John M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dark side of black
2007-09-30 10:54:37 · answer #8 · answered by Me 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't read until tomorrow morning. Hit me up then.
2007-09-30 10:55:12 · answer #9 · answered by hakim1125 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
try to write
2007-09-30 11:06:40 · answer #10 · answered by egyank 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋