Spiritual Rhapsody
Divinity descended to the mortal planes in a manner so inconspicuous,
Faith was a constant companion while I remained so unpretentious.
I was thrown by destiny into his benign presence,
No obstacles ever matched my simplicity and resilience.
Freed from clutches of materialism I entranced in perfection,
Tears of elation sprang out without rhyme or reason.
Destination synonymous to a paradise is the abode of the blessed,
This torch lit by me cannot be extinguished.
A lump of clay transformed into a pot of totality,
Lost in inexhaustible bliss I bloomed to full maturity.
2007-09-30 08:30:27 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Wow you should publish this! I think it is very good! If you do get this published I would hope that you would let me know so I could order a copy of the book. It is so meaningful. It really touched me. I being christian think that in the second set his should be His. That is the only change I would make. It is very powerful!!! Thanks for sharing!
2007-09-30 08:49:18 · answer #1 · answered by teresa m 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good, insightful
2007-09-30 09:12:18 · answer #2 · answered by BklynNative 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was a really good poem....ur really good
2007-09-30 08:42:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol
2007-09-30 08:53:19 · answer #4 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋