I'm writing this poem cos it's true
To tell you (Name) I really love you
Whenever I see you my heart beats really fast
Probably to remind me I’ve found true love at last
(name) I love you I really do.
I only wish you felt the same way to.
I only went to school cos I think you’re cool
You made school so worth while, just to see your beautiful smile
2007-09-29 10:16:07 · 7 answers · asked by Chris S 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
thank you to me friend Andy, as he helped me write it :D
2007-09-29 10:19:57 · update #1
it sounds nice. keep writing
poems are great and make people feel good. I write about feelings all the time .
2007-09-29 12:59:24 · answer #1 · answered by Ginnykitty 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think it is wonderful. Keep up with the poetry. I would get a book and write more of them. I think it was very touching. God Bless.
2007-09-30 01:11:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww i think its cuuteit sounds like its from the heart and i think thats all that matters its much better than i could have ever made up
2007-09-29 19:43:57 · answer #3 · answered by ♥RaWR 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
NEEDS work and development, stay in school.
2007-10-05 17:03:38 · answer #4 · answered by Wylie Coyote 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its a wonderful poem !
2007-09-29 21:57:24 · answer #5 · answered by lovely 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Corney...just one step up from roses are red, violets are blue.
2007-09-29 17:20:15 · answer #6 · answered by westfield47130 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
so cheesy.
2007-09-30 02:08:07 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋