what do you think?

Question

who Knows it so true
that It's vital to everyones life
iN this world of a
Dark time where is there
to turN to
in this Endless tunnule there is
Some way out or
iS there no way out
i look In this never ending
tuNnule to find the
Truth that is so
Harsh I don't know what to do
there was a Endless amount of
truth about the World
Or it was about the
Rude people in this
in the Land of in conseterable world that
people make the world Die every day
For the reason why only
a reAson they could answer them self
so Does this mean what i think it
doEs
only meanS what you
mAke of it
just alWays reamber
And never forget what
You see in the middle of this

there are letter bold. if you write them out they make some words that is the meaning of this. so plz tell me what you think.

Answer 1

Sounds ok to me: "Kindness in the world fades away"



thanks

Answer 2

It's not deep, it's distracting.

You would be better served with the employment of OTHER literary devices, like image, metaphor, alliteration.