I'm writing a paper for Humanities on the Biltmore Estate in Ashville, NC. I'm having a hard time coming up with a thesis statement that doesn't sound too vague. On my last paper she said it was too vague...I don't want to make the same mistake again. Thank you for any suggestions!
2007-09-29 05:00:04 · 2 answers · asked by ttipton24 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
What do you want t say about the Biltmore Estate?
What about, "The Biltmore Estate in Ashville, North Carolina is an example of the opulant mansions built by the nearly unrestricted greed of the industrialists of the late 19th and early 20th century in America."
2007-09-29 05:14:52 · answer #1 · answered by jack of all trades 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
okay. this is just a suggestion. here in new jersey we have a publication called wierd new jersey. maybe there is such a pubication about asheville that would include some interesting tidbits about biltmore estate.
check out: shadowbox.com for example
2007-09-29 12:05:23 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋