This Morning
Written by Semper Fi Reborn
This morning I was awakened,
By a kiss from the Sun.
A ray brushed her lips against me,
And stole my dreams,
Rousing me with her beauty.
I sat up and thanked God.
He said I was welcome,
And that I should enjoy this day He created.
I said Amen!
For this morning,
I was awakened by the vision,
Of the same Sun that Adam saw.
The same Sun that Moses walked under.
The same Sun that Jesus healed under.
The very same Sun that God placed in the sky,
And I wondered,
Why?
Why am I so blessed to see Your creations O' God?
All of the beauty that You,
Have bestowed upon mankind.
You annoint us with Love.
I Thank You, Abba.
For the gift and breath of life,
This Morning.
2007-09-29 01:26:12 · 6 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I really liked your lines on Adam, Moses, and Jesus. It was a nice statement to how while generations come and go we are all still under that same Sun moving thorough our lives.
Very nice spiritual poem.
2007-09-29 02:49:10 · answer #1 · answered by Todd 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
If I were the religious type I would have loved it.
But I did like the first 2 lines very much.
Somehow I always considered the sun a he but the morning could be a she.
I thak you Abba was beautiful too.
2007-09-29 09:02:31 · answer #2 · answered by cynic 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it my favorite line is
This morning I was awakened,
By a kiss from the Sun.
A ray brushed her lips against me,
And stole my dreams,
Rousing me with her beauty.
Good job.
Have a GREAT DAY.:)
2007-09-29 08:37:14 · answer #3 · answered by Krissy 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well done, a great poem and a great testimony.
God bless you and yours
Dondi
2007-09-29 09:34:05 · answer #4 · answered by Dondi 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
How beautiful!! :)
Thank you for the smile, my friend!! :)
You and your family have a wonderful weekend!!
Hugs!!
2007-09-29 08:32:26 · answer #5 · answered by Moon :) 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thank you. Keep sharing.
2007-09-29 09:36:40 · answer #6 · answered by toybreaker 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋