1. You could almost see the twinkle of happiness in my eye.
2. You could tell that I was intoxicated with joy.
2007-09-27 11:04:26 · 5 answers · asked by **JEN** 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
with all honesty the first sentence is more descriptive, it describes the expression of someone's eyes by saying happiness, and the twinkle which describes the happiness. For instance it could have said, " you could almost see the tearness of happiness in my eye."
2007-09-27 11:39:34 · answer #1 · answered by qtpie9374 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#2 but I would change the word tell to see.
You could see that I was intoxicated with joy.
2007-09-27 18:12:52 · answer #2 · answered by Frosty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No.1 I can see that. Drunk with joy? Doesn't make much sense. Sounds confusing.
2007-09-27 18:12:54 · answer #3 · answered by Max 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. - it's more suggestive. I like the "almost"!
2007-09-27 18:12:57 · answer #4 · answered by zoomjet 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the first one because being intoxicatedd is hard immagine
2007-09-27 18:23:52 · answer #5 · answered by dragonking1990 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋