A thank you letter
For A Carpet shampooing job
So I can get a Home Cleaning acct out of them!
Dear, ----
On 9-20-07 I Shampooing your carpet. I would like to thank you for the job of shampooing your carpet. I would like to go on to thank you for being a great comeer. I hopeing that you will have me back to clean your home ever 2 weeks.
your Frend
Robert
2007-09-27 10:50:45 · 6 answers · asked by rpoilto 1 in Business & Finance ➔ Small Business
I really hope the example above is something you quickly wrote because the grammar, punctuation and spelling is horrible. Try this instead -- please!
Dear ----,
I want to thank you for hiring me to shampoo your carpet on Sept. 20, 2007. I hope you are satisfied with my work and will consider hiring me for regular cleanings. Please contact me with any questions or concerns.
Sincerely,
Robert
* Check out a book from the library on business correspondence. It will help you expand your opportunities.
2007-09-27 10:58:16 · answer #1 · answered by Merrie 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dear, ----
On 9-20-07
I Shampooed your carpet. I would like to thank you for the ability to shampoo your carpet. I would like to go on to thank you for also being a great customer. I'm wishing that you will have me back to clean your home ever 2 weeks or so.
2007-09-27 17:56:49 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Spell check would be a good start and in Word there are Wizard templates that give you proper phrasing. Personally this letter might make them question why they hired you. A better thank you and invitation to service their carpets more often would read more like this:
Dear Mr. Smith
Thank you for the opportunity to service your carpets. I hope you found the job to your satisfaction. In my professional opinion you would benefit from our bi-weekly maintenance service it is a great value at only ($) per service or buy 12 and get the 13th free!
If you liked my work please tell your friends if not please tell me so I can correct it.
Sincerely,
Joe Carpetcleaner
Hope this helps!
2007-09-27 18:33:15 · answer #3 · answered by Walking on Sunshine 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Date
Re: Carpet Shampoo on 9-20-07
Dear Mr. ___
I would like to thank you for the opportunity of having you as a client. I enjoyed working with you and look forward to continuing this service on a monthly basis. Please let me know when would be most convinient for you and your family. Feel free to call me at any time at _____ to schedule your next appointment.
Thank you,
Robert
2007-09-27 18:01:32 · answer #4 · answered by C M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Needs a lot of help homey, and I would love to help you if you want. The thing is, instead of kissing up to them for "letting you" clean their carpets, why don't you let your work and your asking price do the talking and politely ask them if they would like you to come back on a regular basis...?
Lol, DO NOT PAY someone to proofread this for you. I can do it professionally as well (college tutor), and I will do it for free.
Listen to Merrie, the one above her is worse than yours.
2007-09-27 17:56:03 · answer #5 · answered by J-Love 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
not to be insulting but first you should learn how to spell. and do not sign it your friend Robert as they are customers not your friends (unless they do really happen to be friends of yours). My suggestion is to send them something worded like this: thank you for your business and i look forward to serving you again and offer a 10% discount on the next job that you do for them. nothing reels them in like knowing they will save money! and include your business card and just sign it thank you Robert with you company name underneath if you use a company name
2007-09-27 18:05:43 · answer #6 · answered by hermitofnorthdome 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋