I'm writing an invective, or a "mean" paper about achilles. What do you think of my prolouge, or introduction?
The horrifying conduct and atrocious deeds of Achilles’, the stubborn Greek, warrant no honor or praise. Indeed, he should be looked upon as a villain, rather than the hero many mistook him for.
2007-09-27 08:22:04 · 3 answers · asked by sOcCaH_is_my_LiFE 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
Also, tell me, does it flow? Good sentence structure? What would YOU change?
2007-09-27 08:27:47 · update #1
If you were in a class of mine, I would say "good on you," but you had better to be able to prove your judgment with textual cites and supporting Journal quotes.
2007-09-27 10:29:07 · answer #1 · answered by Terry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good so far. Add a little hint as to why he's so evil in the introduction for a hook.
2007-09-27 08:25:24 · answer #2 · answered by dontgivashit_666 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
good luck.
2007-09-27 08:24:55 · answer #3 · answered by lundstroms2004 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋