HAIKU HAIKU for school, are they good enough?

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Carnivals of waves
pound their endless timpani
against themselves

Shafts of golden embers
flickering through gloom
cast night into herself

2007-09-26 18:49:45 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

Beautiful images, however, the counts are off.

You need 5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

count the sounds per line.

2007-09-26 20:24:18 · answer #1 · answered by Princess Picalilly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Neither of these fit the requirements for a Haiku. I would not recommend turning these in.

2007-09-26 22:41:00 · answer #2 · answered by buckeyeLady32 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋

hi

haiku

How...!

2007-09-27 02:05:57 · answer #3 · answered by otteri selvakumar 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋