Do you like my haiku? please tell me :)?

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Do you like my haiku? please tell me :)?

The Sky is on Fire

Like you my haiku?
It's kinda like yoda speak
Easy peezy

2007-09-26 18:18:02 · 3 answers · asked by au_giger 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

sorry, last line is "it's easy peezy"
forgot that extra syllable XD

2007-09-26 18:19:15 · update #1

3 answers

with the extra syllable - you've got it!

2007-09-26 18:36:42 · answer #1 · answered by Princess Picalilly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Silly.

The title is five syllables, and I have to wonder what it has to do with the haiku. Haikus are traditionally about nature in some way, which the title fits. You could have built on that with the other two lines.

Otherwise, it's just a counting exercise. You did well on that part. :)

2007-09-27 01:38:06 · answer #2 · answered by The Babe is Armed! 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋

inventive

2007-09-27 01:23:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋