i made a song about my life
rate it
1 out of 10
1 is the worst
10 is the best
ever since the death of hip hop
all u rappers stopped
all u rappers froze
as i rose
to the number one spot
the new breath of hip hop
hear this and drop
i made your heart beat stop
cause i knew i was back to back with rap
and i aint goin back
i hate that life
money issues,bullying,fights if only i had that knife
kids treated me unfair
so bad that i aint even care
kanye sold more than 1 million copies he's a millionaire
step in my shoes for a day
walk through LA
you'll realize what hip hop has become today
songs like ay bay bay
make no sense today
i liked this girl
she never liked me back
what she meant to me was what i meant for rap
all i want is love fuc^ the money stacks
hip hop is a form of art
especially when it comes from your heart
and what u say is a reflection
this song is my invention
2007-09-26 16:32:11 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i know i cant rap
but i still dont sit back
i can lyrically destroy you on a single track
im not on crack and i dont think im all that
but i believe one of these days its comin back
im still not done i dont know if i will complete it.
2007-09-26 16:32:46 · update #1
i might put this songs instumental in my song
http://youtube.com/watch?v=Pg8hgYHQov0
2007-09-26 16:41:18 · update #2
ha that was hot i like it...i give it a 9.5. I always look a songs for the lyrics and its true that hip hop isnt about anything anymore. Glad someone has the heart to admit and still love hip hop for what its supposed to be.
2007-09-26 16:37:02 · answer #1 · answered by shakursraven 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
if you're reading it without the beat it sounds like a 12 year old wanna be rapper wrote this. i give it a 3 or 4. but if i heard you rap it might or might not go up.
2007-09-26 16:39:18 · answer #2 · answered by Celina :] 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10/10 and a Star for your creativity.
2007-09-26 16:39:50 · answer #3 · answered by Mrs. Victorious 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say 7
2007-09-26 16:38:54 · answer #4 · answered by angel_nurse82 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No I dont even want to read it
go back to the drawing board cheif
2007-09-26 16:35:47 · answer #5 · answered by 4 strings 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
needs a lot of work.....you can join my crew (as in you can join the spit team)...hit up my e-mail if you want in....(in the spit team you can e-mail battle to work on your skills)
2007-09-26 16:42:45 · answer #6 · answered by evil conscience *spit squadron* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its creative.... good on you
2007-09-26 16:37:22 · answer #7 · answered by Leah 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
again?
ok it iz illlllllllllllllllllllllllll!
2007-09-26 16:34:57 · answer #8 · answered by FREDDY 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
nice work man
7.8
2007-09-26 16:37:06 · answer #9 · answered by ZTT477 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
how interesting?!
2007-09-26 16:39:20 · answer #10 · answered by Jess Loves McFly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋