While away they want you close
When you're close they are just gone.
All roses paths they make for you
but when you arrive all spikes slash you.
They are divine, gift from the stars
wild boars they turn as cast you are.
They lure all hearts of loving souls
Distant they are when time turns hard
Devoted women always are
to anyone that catches our heart
We always think they are the same
But life strikes back, as this fake is.
Do you like it?! What do you think about the topic?!
2007-09-26 16:11:46 · 6 answers · asked by Calíope!* 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Mmmm..Not bad, but your last line is a little unclear as to what the fake you're referring to is--life?---a certain man?---your poem?--the drama you've created?
Speaking as a member of the subject gender, I lodge a mild protest at the generalizations---neither divine, nor boar, perhaps you need to meet a few more...
2007-09-26 16:19:28 · answer #1 · answered by Palmerpath 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes, i like it, the topic tell real story about a woman who is not interested of nobody maybe a lot of reasons one of them, he hates man, in relationship, etc., no man are not the same also woman we had different to understand the things we do, words to say.
2007-09-26 23:43:44 · answer #2 · answered by keshia2008 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it really stinks - but then I'm a man.
not all men are the same.
it's dangerous to think that, and classify everyone the same because of a few.
2007-09-26 21:13:21 · answer #3 · answered by art_flood 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Every woman wants something you don't have or thinks you're a different man.
2007-09-26 21:37:25 · answer #4 · answered by Superman at 71 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You definitely know men. Good job!!! I love it.
2007-09-26 16:16:04 · answer #5 · answered by higherlovetx 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good.
2007-09-26 16:21:09 · answer #6 · answered by rubyjuly 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋