grammar check...?

Question

i am a second language leaner, can anyone help me check the grammar?? thanks a lot...
As we know, to be an educator, one should be professional, patient, and a sense of humor. How about in the teaching environment? From my point of view, to be a teacher, one should prepare before the class, know how to control classroom atmosphere, keep asking questions, and absorb others teaching experiences.
First, preparing before the class is an important element that all the teachers need to do. We need to realize that students have different learning styles. Some can absorb knowledge quickly through visual aids, others, on the other hand, may prefer exaggerate body language. Second, as a teacher, one should know how to control atmosphere of the classroom. An interesting classroom is made by the teacher. If one knows how to create an interesting class and provide effective learning environment for the students, it can help them acquire knowledge quickly and motivate them to learn.

Answer 1

In your first sentence, you need the word "have"...and have a sense of humor. Next sentence, you need an apostrophe in the word others to show possession: others' teaching experiences.
Second paragraph, second sentence, use exaggerated rather than exaggerate. Exaggerate is a verb, exaggerated is descriptive. In the next to last sentence I would add "the" before atmosphere...control the atmosphere of the classroom. Also, in your last sentence, add "an" before effective...an effective learning environment.

This is a second language exercise for you? I'm impressed! You're doing very well!

Answer 2

As we know, to be an educator we should be professional, patient and have a sense of humor especially in the teaching environment. From my point of view, to be a good teacher, one should prepare before class. You should know how to control the classroom atmosphere, keep asking questions and absorb others' teaching experiences.

Preparing before the class is an important element that all the teachers need to do. We must realize that students have different learning styles; some can absorb knowledge quickly through visual aids, others, on the other hand, may prefer exaggerated body language. A good teacher makes the classroom interesting. If one knows how to create an interesting class and provide an effective learning environment it can help the students acquire knowledge quickly and motivate them to learn.


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