Thomas
If we could travel,
us alone
where just might
we roam?
What’s my favorite
place to be?
Would you be willing
to take me home?
I salt a dish
it so reminds me
of oceans
air divine
While on this trip
some wine we sip
persuasive.
Please be mine
Ringing from
the champagne flutes
says “yes”
throughout my mind
a temp, a touch,
a feel and such
destined to
intertwine...
...Thomas
2007-09-26 04:45:48 · 7 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
AZ, I cried then wept once more
You are someone I much adore
You make me smile and want to live
My words to you I owe and give
My dreams now filled with color and charm
with you nestled close by arm and arm...
2007-09-26 09:06:33 · update #1
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
i'm not jealous any more...
yes, i am yours
yes, i love the ocean
yes, i am lucky to have a friend such as you
yes, you are always on my mind
yes, i love wine
ok....when are we leaving ???
2007-09-26 08:41:18 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
sweet u guys have a good relationship. Thats important.
I wish u the best!
Keep Writting!
2007-09-26 22:59:54 · answer #2 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very much so, Thomas is a lucky man.
2007-09-26 13:46:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very good poem, by a great artist, Publish!.
2007-09-26 14:21:20 · answer #4 · answered by Dragon'sFire 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
A very fine poem indeed!
2007-09-26 19:39:27 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
loved your poem shad; and this thomas' would be one lucky fellow in deed..
2007-09-26 12:33:59 · answer #6 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think so.
2007-09-26 12:07:28 · answer #7 · answered by Dondi 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋