i not very good but i do a little bit og poetry..
1-not good
2- bad
3- needs work
4- good
5- thats great
My tears slowly run down my cheaks
I thot i was safe and now i remamber
Why i liked being alone
No pain no sarrow
the pain is unbaribal
my hart couldent take it
my cheaks finley go dry
my hart slows
my eyes close just to think of u
sorry for spelling
thanx
2007-09-26 03:36:09 · 9 answers · asked by pitbulllover 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
ok... i have to say that i read the first two lines and stopped.
the spelling is not something to apologize for.... you should just NOT have any spelling mistakes if you ever want people to read your writing.
so: 1- not good... not good at all.
2007-09-26 03:40:06 · answer #1 · answered by Catz Ladee 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
3
2007-09-26 03:41:39 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-09-26 03:38:52 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
4. Good because the poem was a 5... but ure spelling.... is like mine.. and thats not the best in the world.
2007-09-26 03:41:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
for me it is a 4 , with a better spelling it would have been a 5 , but it is really good and so sad ...
2007-09-26 03:42:04 · answer #5 · answered by willow, the yodakitty from hell 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To be very honest with you, I would rate your poem a 3....
2007-09-26 03:39:12 · answer #6 · answered by deiracefan_219 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
4- good
well-written
2007-09-26 03:40:32 · answer #7 · answered by Mag 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
you need to learn how to spell
2007-09-26 03:40:30 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
4..nice one
2007-09-26 03:42:31 · answer #9 · answered by ♣JªYs!ñ 3²™ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋