here is a song i wrote
ever since they be sayin hip hop died
all them quit but i tried
cause i dreamed high
cause i knew i was back to back with rap
and i aint going back
i hate that life
money issues,bullying if only i had that knife
i'd cut that ni**a in half
when i said that u can hear them in the back laugh
kids treated me unfair
kanye sold more than 1 million copies he's a millionaire
step in my shoes for a day
walk through LA
you'll realize what hip hop has become today
i liked this girl
she never liked me back
what she meant to me was what i meant for rap
all i want is love fu^k the money stacks
rate it 1 out of 10
1 is the worst
10 is the best.
2007-09-24 19:24:37 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I'll give you a 3 because I liked the way you started off until you started talking about the N word, cutting someone in half, and then you changed the subject about a girl.
If Kanye can sell over a million records without this, so can you. Try telling a story in each lyric of your song, that'll keep the listener's attention.
2007-09-24 19:37:38 · answer #1 · answered by Dimples 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-09-25 02:27:43 · answer #2 · answered by Troy Girl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-09-25 02:26:58 · answer #3 · answered by Death Girl Am 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a 0
2007-09-25 02:28:49 · answer #4 · answered by stoneytreehugger 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. Sorry, but it doesn't show maturity, and there's nothing new there.
2007-09-25 02:28:37 · answer #5 · answered by Mickey Mouse Spears 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
time to sleep
2007-09-25 02:27:53 · answer #6 · answered by hari prasad 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5......!!!!
2007-09-25 02:43:31 · answer #7 · answered by Spanky the monkey !!! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10 now please mail it to Fat Boy Slim to sing.
2007-09-25 02:33:27 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋