I hate you for the looks I get,
I hate you for the pain.
I hate you for the way you laugh,
While Im struggling to win your game.
I hate you for the things youve said,
I hate you with all of my heart.
I hate you for leaving me here on my own,
Youre the reason that we are apart.
I hate the way I cant accept,
The fact that you are gone.
I hate the way we cant admit,
The fact that we were wrong.
I hate you for the pain youve caused,
And the tears Im forced to cry.
Missing you is what I do,
And still I dont know why.
I hate the way its true that i love you
I hate the way no matter what,
I never can hate you.
2007-09-24 10:40:32 · 10 answers · asked by Erikka 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
wow.. thats awesome. Lots of hate but you explained it very well. I think we can all, at some point, relate to this poem. Great work.. keep writing.
2007-09-24 13:44:50 · answer #1 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8
2016-05-17 21:33:52 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is alot of hate
I like how you described each of them.
It is clear there is alot of pain you are going through.
for example the line I am forced to cry these tears, as well as the line I hate you for the pain the other person caused. I am interpreting either a friendship or relationship gone sour.
2007-09-24 10:58:39 · answer #3 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10+ Spectacular
2007-09-24 15:03:40 · answer #4 · answered by Bailey 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I rate it a 2 for stealing it from a badly acted movie (10 things I hate about you) that was based on a great Shakespearean play (Taming of the Shrew).
2007-09-24 16:29:31 · answer #5 · answered by Nathan D 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
10!!
2007-09-24 14:00:50 · answer #6 · answered by Death Cab for Cutie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 because its meaningful and self explanitory. But i dont feel any passion as i read it. other than that, you should get it published in a poetry book. it rocks and i really do flow with it.
2007-09-24 11:38:56 · answer #7 · answered by asch 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
4, it's okay, said, "hate" a few too many times though.
2007-09-24 13:38:10 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like cliche, so you're going straight to hollywood!
remember me!
2007-09-24 11:25:59 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Really like it give it a 10, please use apostrophe
2007-09-24 11:38:48 · answer #10 · answered by lakelover 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋