poem 1
I just stopped by to take a look
And see if anyone owned this book
No owner did I see around
So I thought I'd jot this little poem down.
Odds and ends
I thought our love was such a dilly
I wish someone would slap me silly!
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I know that I have goofed again
Cuz this ain't how its pose to been!
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smoke smoke makes you choke
too much of it makes you croak!
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sue sue sticked like glue
like to stick her on the bottom of my shoe
then when i need her I don't got to look
All I got to do is pick up my foot!
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while walking down the road one day
I felt the urge to go astray
I wandered off the beaten path
And now I wonder where I'm at!
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He's gone so very far away
I know this time he's gone to stay
I'll wipe my tears, be sad no more
And watch TV and not the door!
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hope you all enjoyed them as much as I enjoyed writing them
2007-09-21 21:42:09 · 7 answers · asked by rosemary h 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Those were great on so many levels, they were fun to read and yet they weren't like totally without a point, they rhymed quite nicely. You gotz some skillz as they say. Keep up the good work, and by the way do you have any more posted anywhere? If you do let me know I'd love to read some more.
2007-09-21 21:53:48 · answer #1 · answered by caminolargo76 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fun rhymes. They remind me of Ogden Nash.
2007-09-22 01:42:44 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I enjoyed much more tan u enjoyed it in writing i guesss.
2007-09-22 00:34:38 · answer #3 · answered by Richa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
they were so different and that is one thing you can never get with some poems and I am very impressed
2007-09-22 00:45:44 · answer #4 · answered by MorneauFan#33 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's OK.
Well, I liked them, on second thought.
2007-09-22 00:50:13 · answer #5 · answered by Nicolette 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yer dere okay
2007-09-21 21:59:51 · answer #6 · answered by Lisa B 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, they were fun to read. ^_^
Good job!
2007-09-21 21:51:23 · answer #7 · answered by Mary 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋