OK.....i was just in english and these lyrics came up in my head.......do u think they are good?..and would they be better for a poem or a song?
You are the hunter
I am the huntee
Hurry, shoot me now
Before I flee
are they good?
2007-09-21 14:18:59 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
well..it's just all i have u can add along to it and i will say that u did that......but what else should i put??
2007-09-21 14:28:11 · update #1
i think they are okay. i mean theres not really that much meaning behind it to me and i think poems should have meaning. i think they should be used for a poem unless you are trying to make a nonsense song.
2007-09-21 14:24:07 · answer #1 · answered by superstar 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
There isn't much meat here. If you come up with a really terrific frame for the words, they could work as a lyric. However, as they are, they don't seem lyric-worthy. I also wonder how "hunter" would sound sung. It's a harsh word so you would want the surrounding words to be gentle but in this case, that's not apparent. Work on your topic more and see where it takes you. I'm inclined to vote in the direction of a poem. Have fun.
2007-09-21 21:29:03 · answer #2 · answered by Just Me Alone 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Songs are poems, But, all poems are not songs.
re-work the meter and they would make good lyrics
Ask your English teacher about Meter, (if you don't already know)
2007-09-21 21:26:09 · answer #3 · answered by ravenscardarkhope 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
put more emotine in it and try to spruc it up to a funky beat then you might want to cahnge some words like huntee
2007-09-21 21:26:11 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a poem
2007-09-21 21:24:54 · answer #5 · answered by Trevor 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, I don't like the part about huntee. Sorry -s
2007-09-21 21:27:01 · answer #6 · answered by Smarks 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It does have a double entendre.
2007-09-21 21:24:38 · answer #7 · answered by angry 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THEY SUCK! WHY EVEN ASK?! U KNOW THEY SUCK! THEY'D SUCK FOR A SONG, AND THEY'D SUCK FOR A POEM! U CAN'T WRITE SO GIVE UP!
2007-09-21 21:24:47 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats kinda sad.
2007-09-21 21:22:13 · answer #9 · answered by Katherine 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋