its nit meant to make anyone cry.......?

Question

tell me what you think...........




I Have Become So.

My rosy cheeks have become so thorny.
My marble eyes have become so dirty.
My long lashes have become but prickling pins.
My round nose has become so crooked.
My plump lips have become nothing more than tattered.
My luscious hair has become nothing less than frizzy twigs falling.
My hands so soft, my hands so sweet, have become the harmers of my body.
My heart, right here, has become but an empty room.
My lungs are now, but floppy balloons, sinking in misery.
My waist so slender has become so broken.
My long legs have become but buckled locks
Buckled locks collapsing underneath me.
My height has made me but a towering girl,
I tower over my grave death.
Farewell my friends, family, people
From a girl so depressed, so lonely.

--flee1906
20/9/2007

Answer 1

depression - it touches every person on the earth. Don't bring yourself down and think of the way to get out, if it depends on you.
I am looking for excuses all the time and I feel that over the years I feel depressed by excusing myself and not attaining just GREAT results that will finally satisfy myself. I am depressed too. I think what we need to do is to find more cheerfull people around us.
It's getting late here where I am and it will obviously rain. I am listening to Havana Nights by Christina Aguilera and obviously I am sad and will be more before I get to bed today.

Answer 2

Very well written. But it troubles me to see somebody who I presume to be so young to be so troubled. But well written none the less.

Answer 3

I like your poem. But i do not know what made you so upset in life.

Answer 4

Why?

Answer 5

"snap, snap, snap"

Answer 6

That is great, Thanks for sharing