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when the train blows its whistle
i know what time it is
and when you give me that look
its no more than a quize
as i've seen that look before
thats when im up an adam
and headed out the door
your words are fists of fury
you scold me like a dog
thats why im in a hurry
you got me jumpin like a frog
i go off for a spell
in your furry you do dwell
and when i get back home
you always give me hell
once you calm down
you make it worth all that crap
naked and giving kisses
while squirming on my lap

2007-09-19 19:09:01 · 2 answers · asked by narlyknot 4 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

2 answers

what's the question?
If you need comments, I'd say that the speaker is contemptuous but the poet may want to make the piece more serious by by revising this line:

thats why im in a hurry
you got me jumpin like a frog

2007-09-19 20:08:00 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0 0

Like most stuff here this is dreadful. And like most stuff here it is NOT punctuated or spelled correctly.

2007-09-19 20:36:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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