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By the title alone, we can determine that within the relationship there is uneasiness between power and protection, because of the child-like connotations that the word “Daddy” brings to mind.

I am rewriting my analysis of Sylvia Plath's "Daddy" for AP Lit. This is essentially what needs to be said, but I just need to know how to better form this sentance.

2007-09-19 16:02:31 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

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By the title alone, we can determine that within the relationship there is uneasiness between power and protection, because of the child-like connotations that the word “Daddy” brings to mind.

Revision:

The childlike connotation of the title "Daddy" suggests the tension Plath evokes between father as authority and protector.

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Cheers,
Bruce

2007-09-19 16:17:46 · answer #1 · answered by Bruce 7 · 1 0

It seems to be kind of a run on sentence. I'm not sure if it is grammatically correct to start the sentence with "By.." either?? Maybe I'm wrong.

How does this sound:
The title alone causes one to conclude that within the relationship there is an uneasiness between power and protection. Primarily because of the child-like connotations that the word “Daddy” brings to mind.

Otherwise, just leave the first part like you have it and make the last part a second sentence.

Wow, that took me a while. I feel bad for anyone having to write a paper right now. Uggh.

2007-09-19 16:28:46 · answer #2 · answered by al819604 2 · 1 0

By looking at the title only, one can determine there is uneasiness between power and protection within the relationship because of the child-like connotations the word "Daddy" brings to mind.

2007-09-19 16:10:41 · answer #3 · answered by skyblue 2 · 0 0

From the relationship assigned by the book’s title, we can determine that there is uneasiness between power and protectionism that child-like connotations of the word “Daddy” suggests.

Otherwise, break your statement into two sentences so that you do not have a run-on sentence.

Good luck!

2007-09-19 16:18:22 · answer #4 · answered by TwoDots 4 · 0 0

I don't see anything that is grammatically incorrect in the sentence other than it seems to be somewhat wordy. One possible rewrite might be:

"In the title, we observe unease in the relationship between power and protection, because of the child-like connotations it evokes."

I don't know if that captures the exact sentiment that you were trying to express, as I have not read that particular work. I may have altered the essence of what you were trying to say. I hope not. Just a suggestion to help avoid a cumbersome sentence. I hope that helps (probably not, but it was worth a shot).

Good luck

2007-09-19 16:24:45 · answer #5 · answered by john 3 · 1 0

The title alone brings up issues of power and protection. "Daddy" as a parental figure could represent authority, but since it is less formal than "father," it implies a close relationship between father and daughter.

(or that the author would have liked it to have been a close relationship....)

I just thought the sentence should have been broken in two, and explained differently, but since it's out of context, maybe you explain later. In that case, ignore me!

Good luck; AP Lit can be tough.

2007-09-19 16:27:10 · answer #6 · answered by Roald Ellsworth 5 · 0 0

no a million) it is not any longer an entire sentence. 2) it is attempting to make a assessment. for this reason, it needs to have a observe like "greater" or "much less" or some thing alongside those lines in the past "nicely-customary." 3) "For" would not make experience the place it is at. i think of "for pronounced" is meant to be "aforementioned" or "forementioned."

2016-10-09 12:25:22 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I think that is a very good sentence and i dont think you should word it any other way

2007-09-19 16:07:39 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

you've misspelled sentence. i didn't bother checking the rest.

2007-09-19 16:10:16 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1 1

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