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When they're teaching English, they really should warn these kids that they might actually have to use it one day. Oh well. Another one left behind.

2007-09-19 11:17:54 · answer #1 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 2 2

Two simple pieces of advice:

1. Use English, not text messaging, when you write your poem

2. Don't use the name at end of the line...that way you won't have to force words to fit just so they rhyme, you'll be able to use words that rhyme more easily...if you feel you need to rhyme in the first place, and if you do, avoid couplets...lines that rhyme back to back...here's an example of bad vs good.

Bad:
When I dream I dream of you
Loving you is what I do
You're the light, my sun my heart
And I have loved you from the start

Good:
When I dream I dream of you
You're my light, my sun my heart
Loving you is what I do
And I have loved you from the start

Do you hear/see the difference between the first and second examples? They use the same lines, but in a different order, and by staggering the rhymes it makes the poem sound more mature.

Final word...most women I've met are less interested in rhymed poetry than someone writing down words that express true feelings with words that don't sound forced or contrived. Try writing something from the heart and don't worry if the words rhyme or not...just make them honest and don't use cliches or common expressions...don't say "light of my life", "heart and soul", etc., just say that she makes it hard to beathe when she's near you because your heart wants to explode with its love for her...something like that.

good luck

2007-09-23 01:03:38 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 1 0

Poems don't rhyme with a word. Poems rhyme in general.

Words rhyme with other words.

There are some okay suggestions here. But forcing a rhyme on a poem is ike twisting someone's arm in order for them to tell the truth: no matter what they say, it just doesn't sound like they mean it.

2007-09-19 14:14:56 · answer #3 · answered by Nathan D 5 · 0 0

i do no longer think of i'm going to ever determine this one out. "what's poetry?" is a complicated question. Does poetry want meter? no longer each thing called "poetry" at present has a sustained meter. Does poetry want a shorter line length than a short tale? Then somewhat some works may well be excluded. Can a song be poetry, or is it excluded in view it is sung, even although-- a protracted time in the past-- poetry replaced into in lots of situations spoken (and in step with threat sung) aloud? Does poetry want words? i think of it is the only one i will choose on. i think of poetry needs words, yet i've got had people disagree with me. in case you're taking poetry instructions in college presently, you will many times pay attention the different of your opinion. somewhat some pupils declare that the poet isn't loose to precise herself till she has broken loose from the detention center of rhyme and form. This opinion is so customary at present that it variety of feels, mockingly, narrow-minded. loose verse is meant to be freeing, yet i've got met many adherents who do no longer seem liberated adequate to contemplate all sorts of poetry, and supply rhyme a threat. i'm hoping i've got helped some.

2016-10-09 12:00:01 · answer #4 · answered by finkle 4 · 0 0

don't try to use poetry if you are not writing it you will not be able to make the emotion behind it your own. You should learn to use English properly it would improve the impression you make on Daniela.

2007-09-19 11:21:46 · answer #5 · answered by Curiam 3 · 2 0

You mean so much to me daniela,
I would love to be yours forever.
You make me shine like the sun,
And I really think you're the one.
Please say you'll leave me never,
Cause you're my daniela.

2007-09-19 11:50:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

my for u love shines like the colours of a ROSELLA

i'll shield you from the storm, stand under my UMBRELLA

I love you, i'll be yours FOREVER

Ive got something to TELL YA

2007-09-19 11:31:04 · answer #7 · answered by shiftymad 2 · 1 0

daniela
you are the gel -a
that seals my soul
i've been thru hell-a
daniela
and you bring me heaven
daniela
i'm your fella

2007-09-19 11:19:00 · answer #8 · answered by whtdoido 2 · 0 1

daniela daniela
oh what can i tell ya
tell me please can i be your fella
lol need more info to do any better

2007-09-19 11:19:58 · answer #9 · answered by donay 1 · 2 1

http://www.rhymezone.com/

2007-09-19 11:17:27 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

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