thanks
here's mine!
your mustard covered
vienna sausages were
eaten by me thanks
2007-09-19 08:04:17 · 6 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Although it's not original, my favorite has always been:
Haikus are funny
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerator.
2007-09-19 08:08:16 · answer #1 · answered by David B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Traditional haikus, even those in English, use nature to express a revelation or create an image. It uses the last line as a turn, a parallel thought that brings focus on the poem's subject. A traditional haiku must also use "season" words.
More contemporary haikus retain the use of the turn in the last line, but are on any number of topics.
Your "haiku" met the beat requirements, but not the form.
Chili dogs at night
Bark until you let them out
Dinner down the drain
just an example
2007-09-23 07:26:29 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry
Music of the mind
Speaks what nothing else can say
With grace and beauty
2007-09-19 21:51:49 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
so bored at work
need a day off fast i'm
bustin my a$s here
2007-09-19 15:09:46 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
He got on my nerves.
His remote control is gone.
Spot has a new toy.
2007-09-19 15:08:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I walked through the door.
To find everyone gone.
Realized it wasn't my home.
2007-09-19 16:23:07 · answer #6 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋