Song Writing?

Question

how can i write a good song about how i feel without it sounding corny?

Answer 1

It won't be corny if you don't try to make it a song..at least not right away. Gut checks always make better songs.

Here's one of mine:

Now That I’m Ready For Love

Another year wiser, another year older
Another day empty, another night colder
Another squandered opportunity
But now that I’m ready for love, no one’s ready for me

I sift through these streets, filled with aimless dancers
In calm desperation, still searching for answers
Leaves green and inviting, new rings on the tree
But now that I’m ready for love, no one’s ready for me

Young maidens sense some hot wave of emergency
They marry and mate in a false sense of urgency
As the hurried home crumbles, the fingers point blames
And all hold back burned hearts as they re-alter names
Never considering a cause holding true
That someone like me could want someone like you
That someone like me could need someone like you
That someone like me could love someone like you

INSTRUMENTAL BRIDGE

Another year wiser, another year older
Another day empty, another night colder
Another squandered opportunity
But now that you’re ready for love, are you ready for me?
Ready for me?
Really ready for me?
Now that you’re ready for love, are you ready for me....

Laughing Dolphin Music
March 2007
Your Uncle Dodge

Answer 2

If I heard what it seemed like then might be I would reply this bigger, but it surely appears beautiful well, and I believe I might pay attention to it on circumstances... It turns out a little bit brief and might simplest be like a a million:30 and so much songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... but it surely appears adore it might be a well track... Hope I helped...

Answer 3

Just let it flow....do a rough draft where you just write your feelings and don't stop....and then review it and correct it.
I am sure that if you truly speak from the heart, it won't be corny.