1.My Aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave it off and I don't believe that because my friend shaved hers and it grew back
--there are 5 mistakes.
2. A peanut isn't no nut its a bean.
--there are 3 mistakes
HELP. please no RUDE answers.
2007-09-18 15:50:14 · 11 answers · asked by :)) ♥ 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
My aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them but not if you shave them off. I don't believe that because my friend shaved hers and they grew back.
1Aunt not a proper noun 2 run-on sentence 3period at the end 4shave them off 5 they grew back
A peanut isn't a nut. It's a bean.
double negative run-on sentence contraction of it is
2007-09-18 16:05:45 · answer #1 · answered by ganna 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My aunt told me, that eyebrows do grow back if they are plucked, but not when they are shaved off. I dont't believe that,because; my friend shaved her eyebrows off and they grew back. 2.) A peanut is not a nut, it is a bean.
2007-09-18 23:08:33 · answer #2 · answered by Jackie C 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My aunt told me that eye brows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave them off. I don't believe that because my friend shaved hers' and they grew back. 2. A peanut isn't no nut its a bean,= A peanut is not a nut, it is a bean. or A peanut isn't a nut, it's a bean.
2007-09-18 23:08:07 · answer #3 · answered by ruth4526 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave them off, and I don't believe that because my friend shaved hers and they grew back.
A peanut isn't a nut, it's a bean.
2007-09-18 23:02:01 · answer #4 · answered by zanessa<3 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. My aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave them off, and I don't believe that becuause my friend shaved hers, and they grew back.
2. A peanut isn't a nut; it's a bean.
2007-09-18 23:01:41 · answer #5 · answered by skyblue 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. My *aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave *them *. *I don't believe that because my shaved hers and *they grew back*.
2. A peanut *isn't *a nut, *it's a bean.
2007-09-18 23:00:47 · answer #6 · answered by capriciousclover 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1) first there is a switch from a plural to a singular when referring to the eyebrows, basically from "them" to "it"; it's a run on sentence, the second part should be separated; "my friend shaved hers" should be referrig to something...it doesn't say eyebrows; "it grew back" should probably be "they grew back"; usually after a comma the first thing said refers back to the subject of the sentence and you can see that "but not if you shave it off" has no relation to "my aunt".
2) there is a double negative "isn't no"; "its" should be it's; and there should probably be a comma after the word nut.
i hope i helped and i hope i'm right!
2007-09-18 23:00:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1-1) If I pluck them
1-2) Not if I
1-3) Shave THEM off
1-4) BUT I don't believe
1-5) and THEY grew back
2-1) Isn't A
2-2) Its
2-3) Need a comma after nut???
2007-09-18 23:00:19 · answer #8 · answered by charonnisis 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#2. 1. isn't a nut
2. its should be it's
3. A comma should be between nut and it's
2007-09-18 23:00:10 · answer #9 · answered by Alex B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. aunt shouldn't be capitalized
no comma needed after them
"shave it" should be, "shave them"
it's a run-on so erase the "and," and start a new sentence at "I don't"
"it grew back" should be, "they grew back"
2. "no" should be "a"
you need a comma after "nut"
"its" should be, "it's"
2007-09-18 22:59:56 · answer #10 · answered by plentyofmoxie84 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋