Tell me what you think? Better yet?
The thoughts of you not being
The thought of you not living
I can not imagine
I wonder what you mother is thinking
Just a few letters and it seems we have
Been friend for a lifetime
And now there is nothing but silence.
My e-mails not received
My letters gone unanswered
I can’t call you, tough you, feel you, or see you
You are too far over seas.
I knew this would happen with you in Iraq
Leaving us behind
With hope that you would come home
Safe and unharmed
Letters not answered
E-mails unopened
A world lost with war
A solider lost from home
A smile so close but so far
Happiness once felt and now gone
Worrisome friends and family
Waiting to hear from a soldier
Letters unanswered
Emails unopened
All lost at war.
2007-09-18 09:37:42 · 2 answers · asked by Simply Lisa 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
yeah change tough to touch
I knew this would happen with you in Iraq
Change knew to feared to sound a little more "grown" but it is much better than the first draft
2007-09-18 10:34:52 · answer #1 · answered by FallenAngel© 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what does it mean to tough you?
2007-09-18 17:24:46 · answer #2 · answered by HisPrincess 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋