Somewhere beyond cold earth and dry sea,
swim molecules of something we intended to be.
Two halves of one perfect yet incomplete whole,
with infinite equations undisclosed by the soul.
Somewhere concealed under what was and what is,
lies daybreak and darkness within hers, without his.
Somewhere between should I? , or could I? , decide,
dwells proof beyond doubt, that time is not on our side.
A.Byers©2007
2007-09-18 07:54:48 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Maybe I am a bit strange but I get it and I like it my friend, especially the last line...
2007-09-18 08:14:11 · answer #1 · answered by FallenAngel© 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its deep. Its imagery is splendid, (if i can even spell imagery right rofl.) You had a meaning, a point...It seems you doing some soul searching and your feeling imcomplete...
Like your lost...
I know how that goes.
This is what I gather about YOU from the poem.
Sorry. I got a bit sidetracked. SImply put: I really like it. It shows me what you were feeling when you answered.
2007-09-26 07:25:50 · answer #2 · answered by Willowmeana 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Realizing that we have not achieved what we thought we would when we were young and admitting that we made choices that cost us an end to some really important dreams is definitely hard. We lost time we could have used better. Now that time cannot be redeemed. I like it! Hope it is ok if I save it.
2007-09-18 16:17:31 · answer #3 · answered by ganna 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It kind of gives a feel of desperation, like one is forcing another onto thenselves, clever and alltogether not a bad mind thinking institute! Well done!
2007-09-23 20:56:54 · answer #4 · answered by kissaled 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, but poems about pure-scientific things are rare because science and the art of literature have no things in common.
2007-09-18 08:06:48 · answer #5 · answered by Petru Dimitriu 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You have an unique gift. I truly enjoyed your
poem. It is very descriptive.
2007-09-18 08:25:52 · answer #6 · answered by Precious Gem 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really one of a different kind anybody can write the normal poems..but yours is really good as well as different..keep up the good work..
2007-09-26 06:23:02 · answer #7 · answered by sayali 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So hauntingly beautiful, so beautifully sad & alone. Thank you for sharing.
2007-09-25 07:40:45 · answer #8 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2007-09-26 03:30:01 · answer #9 · answered by Cherry Darling 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Exactly right! I love it.
2007-09-26 06:23:48 · answer #10 · answered by 2bzy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋