Sept, 17,2007
Roaring thunder in the distance
Drip drop drip drop goes the colorless rain
As the gray takes over the sun
A tear to wipe off my face
You said you would always be
The distance dust I still see
The clawing and crushing at my aching heart
Helpless defeated I fall apart
Consumed by the insanity in you
To get rid of the sanity in me
Washed away with every drop
Wishing to cease to breathe again
No longer found is me
The end is near and I slowly see it coming
Where are you ?
Who will mend my shattered heart?
For as a child I once believed but now
I cannot seem to understand
Pain,
Anger,
Fear,
You let it be!!
2007-09-18 07:01:15 · 3 answers · asked by WhErE Do I BeGiN??? 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Hey Babe Lighten up,
You sound suicidal. That ain't going to solve anything. I would suggest that you book into a top hotel get them to deliver champagne and roses to your room, totally spoil yourself. Then the day after, repeat the process. Nobody is worth getting so upset about. Remember ther is always karma. What goes around comes around, make sure that you stick around to see it happen. Good luck and God bless.
2007-09-18 07:20:16 · answer #1 · answered by wjoebanks 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is a positive twist at the end, the person is looking to get better. Most people who work at getting better usually end up improving.
2007-09-18 14:06:09 · answer #2 · answered by Steve C 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked the colorless rain....the gray takes over the sun.... well, actually, I really liked it all.
Good poem.
2007-09-18 14:21:10 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋