This is the first song I have ever wrote how is it?
How is this song? im not going to give my age but im not yet in high school?
Baby I know about you.Ya baby I know the truthe Ya I know 'Bout the pain im going through.Ya I know about you and him Ya and what you do.Iknow how feel about now baby.You say you goin out of town to a Hotel.When I find you with a hound at a old motel.Well i hope you heard me sang 'cause im going out with a bang.BANG I dont need you know more you can walk out that door and I wont care and I wont dare stare at you beautiful hair nomore NO baby your his you go a head and leav please as you breath just turn to me and youll see baby I dont care anymore.No Ive been thinkin of you for a long time and now i finally have you off my my mine.So baby your his just go and leave and please never think of me .Ya bavy were through ive had anough.Your his
2007-09-17 11:10:23 · 1 answers · asked by Joe(Static) 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
Well, the lyrics are too simple and worried about style to be effective. The spell check button was ignored. Also, what exactly is the intended format for this?
You need to dig deeper if you want to be an effective lyricist. Keep trying. Keep a journal and write down what you think is interesting. Use that to make a song. Don't follow in anyone's footsteps completely.
2007-09-17 11:30:13 · answer #1 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋