What do you think of my poetry?

Question

Please visit this page and tell me what you think of my poems! Here is the url:

http://www.poemhunter.com/amity-willows/

Thank you!

Answer 1

You, dear lady, have mastered several forms of free form poetry. Your missives are easily read and understood. Your use of the understated similes in several pieces indicate a thorough knowledge of self and self confidence.

Your punctuation is impeccable, a rarity these days when so few poets-in-waiting have any knowledge of the use and understanding of punctuation or how the misplaced, errant comma can be detrimental to the entire piece.

Most of the 19 pieces of work on your web site indicate a sad, solitary life fraught with love-pain, agony of rejection and mourning the loss of friendships.

I would like to see more of your work. Having said that, try something a bit lighter.

You are good! Keep up the good work.

Answer 2

I don't know. It's like you know how to write, but you're not doing it consistently. Some of them have a nice voice; some of them are kind of bland. At times you started with a pleasing rhyme scheme, and then you abandoned it. I guess you just need to revisit your poems and see what you can do to improve them. I think you are capable of writing better poems if you want to.

Answer 3

they're really good. read a few my favorites were broken and rain fall down on me. keep up the good work!!

Answer 4

A new day blew me away

that was great d(^.^)b 9.5/10!

Answer 5

these are amazing! i especially like rain fall down on me!

Answer 6

Pretty dark, but if that's what you're going for, it's good.

Answer 7

Good work.
Keep it up!!!