They keep deleting my account, even though, and I know that it may be hard to understand, I love them. They touched me, sometimes privately, and sometimes, just on the internet. But, I have to have some place to go, where irreverance and lust for life have a meaning outside of "coke or pepsi?" If I write a poem about any subject you come up with, will you accept me into this community?
i wrote a lyric one time
for a girl
named carrie
she, makes it hard
for me to think.
and with her every
twist and turn
i find her
irresistable.
2007-09-15 20:19:46 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
when i was a girl
and my father was a warrior
we , that is my family
stood
up
against
everyone.
some joker in christchurch
wanted to say
something. sounded like hate
but me papa
and me mum
protect me from
someone
we see on tv
maybe just an arab
or a repulican
or a pope
who shows their hate
and never sees
that we are all
just animals
well, at least us libras
2007-09-15 20:35:04 · update #1
there you go madame s
2007-09-15 20:37:53 · update #2
springtime meant more for me
than some of my friends
i had to study
i watched bobby
who i had a crush on
play with linda
who i hated
and wished that i
were so young
so i talk with jesus
at least him i
can understand
he is magnificent
compared to bobby
i go to church
and wait for god
to talk with me
because
I have a lot to say
back
2007-09-15 21:09:49 · update #3
there you go lady eagle7
2007-09-15 21:10:19 · update #4
hey, i never said I was a "good poet" , dangit it , just dangit it. and carrie, if you read this, yes , that is real poetry.
2007-09-15 21:23:30 · update #5
i eat antipasta twice
just because she is so nice
royricha
royricha the girl from the pizzeria
zuma zum zuma zum
baccharat!
---Louis Prima
2007-09-15 22:03:34 · update #6
Yes, come on over we need more Cure fans!
Feel free to write a poem about me anytime.
2007-09-15 20:28:45 · answer #1 · answered by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Feel free to come over. My poetry is basically from the heart.
Religion & spirituality are open topics in poetry. Open up and let your feelings flow. No poem is wrong. People are just different.
2007-09-16 07:44:42 · answer #2 · answered by purplelady 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
8 track mind, you have a good one!
I am sorry to hear you got the different accounts deleted.
And you put that together well, with rhyming.
We should all be allowed to go wherever we want to on YA.
2007-09-16 03:31:57 · answer #3 · answered by ? 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Yes - please, retire R&S, and stay in poetry, or philosophy ... but only on the condition that you funnel all your lust into perfectly arranged sonnets ... oh! and there must be rhyme scheme, too...sorry
2007-09-16 12:50:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Of Course!. Come over to P&S too , its always peacefull
2007-09-16 03:25:27 · answer #5 · answered by How Soon is Now? 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Poetry AND you are a Libran too!
Do you have a Y!A boyfriend?
2007-09-16 18:16:11 · answer #6 · answered by Icy Gazpacho 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Of course ur welcome
2007-09-16 04:54:13 · answer #7 · answered by Richa 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋