It's edited and finished and will take you perhaps ten minutes to read. Because it's too long to post here you can follow this link it you're interested:
http://unmired.livejournal.com/
(It's based on a modern ballet, with dialogue, that was written and performed some years back. Any sincere feedback is more than welcome and it's more than okay to trash this if you feel the need to do so. My ego is healthy enough.)
2007-09-15 16:39:56 · 3 answers · asked by Doc Watson 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
(And yes, I wrote this drivel. The main alterations from this and the ballet with dialogue is, of course, that descriptive narrative was added to replace the visual story telling.)
2007-09-15 16:46:21 · update #1
It's 2 in the morning. Dylan is singing. I have finished reading and viewing your masterpieces. It has been a wonderful experience during this early hour of the morn. I thank you Doc.
2007-09-15 19:11:34 · answer #1 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
His ego is healthy!
Believe me.
And he likes the word drivel!
Believe me.
2007-09-15 23:45:35 · answer #2 · answered by Harry Lillis 2 · 0⤊ 3⤋
I really liked it and it shows how intelligent you are.
2007-09-16 12:15:10 · answer #3 · answered by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋