I wrote this cause my dads girlfriend just left again for the 6th time and I just wrote this for her but I dont know if it is good enough to give I dont want it sounding corny and me emailing it to her so is it good enough to email her it?
Well you see me in my awful stage. The tears streaming down my face. I try and stay strong
with my emotions when I see you but, I cant hold it in any longer.
You come and go each and every time, you never stay for too long, but here in my Heart you will
always stay.
As I wonder if you will come back in my Life and maybe stay, I know that
will just be a Fantasy of mine. I cant help but think of our
good times together it will last forever.
as I look up to you as my real Mom I wonder if you ever knew how much I loved you
I might have not shown it but right here and now I always thought of you as my #1 mom
2007-09-15 11:03:17 · 3 answers · asked by SCOTLAND! 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
That is very sweet and I think you should send it (email is fine)... but obviously there is something going on between you and your dad's girlfriend. You may not be privy to it, but I do wish you the best. You sound like a strong person.
I like your poem because it doesn't judge her in any way. It's simply an expression of your honest feelings for her and what she means to you. It doesn't beg her to come back.
Great job! I wish you the best... I hope you get through this :)
2007-09-15 11:12:25 · answer #1 · answered by Cochy 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it. very emotional.
2007-09-15 11:17:17 · answer #2 · answered by StarShine G 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
send it to her
2007-09-15 11:10:43 · answer #3 · answered by Backhoe 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋